Wednesday 18 December 2013

Basic animatic

This is our basic animatic for our OTS. It isn't the correct length but we wanted to do it just to see the shots we wanted to do for our final piece.


(This is only the first draft. We had to go back and add more pictures)
Animatic neo noir OTS from Georgia Smith on Vimeo.

We thought it would be a lot better to take pictures of the shots we were using rather than drawing them, because it was easier to look at and do. The animatic is only 40 seconds which will not be the actual length of the OTS, which should end up being abut 2 minutes. However we haven't really developed the script yet so we are going to look at that on friday and decide when sounds and speech is, which will indeed make the OTS a lot longer.

Our OTS is going to look a lot better than this, this was just a starting draft. We still have to look at colouring, sound, titles and the script. The reason there are not titles in the first 40 seconds of the animatic is because we haven't really looked at it. It is a bit dull in the animatic however in the actual piece there will be narration over the top of the walking sequence to build up to the action happening later on.

(WHERE NEW ANIMATIC WILL GO)

Animatic neo noir ots final final final from Georgia Smith on Vimeo.
This is our final animatic. It isn't very different from the first one, we needed to add more shots which we had forgotten in the first place.

1 comment:

  1. not bad and a good entry on your blog: it shows the plan - at the moment - it is a little slow at the start: you need a wider range of shots/angles etc
    the narrative lacks punch - try to get a more dramatic plot - this has the feel of a soap rather than a melodramatic film

    add comments about titles - what/where/why

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